Tuesday 1 September 2020

Stella's persuading writing


 

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  2. I like the picture you've created to support your thoughts on wearing mufti to school Stella. What changes would you make to the uniform if you were allowed? In other words,
    What would your ideal uniform look like?

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  3. There is a lot of heart in this writing Stella. I know you love to run free. Maybe if you have to have a uniform, you could design a more comfortable uniform for your school instead.

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  4. I love your picture Stella! and your writing is very persuasive

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  5. Completely agree! It's nice to wear what's comfortable.

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